Story Ideas

There’s the soft clicking of my heels on the stone pavement and the occasional sound of a leaf being crushed. My thoughts dwindle and spiral about like autumn leaves in the wind. Yes, the season of decline is upon us. It’s been rainy, windy and gloomy. Although our summer wasn’t a very spectacular season, I still miss it. That’s, of course, partially due to not having much to do over summer; other than hanging out and sleeping in. Good times…

Now, I am attending university. It’s a daily task; walking to school, attending lectures, classes and/or workshops, heading homework, doing homework and so on. It’s very time and energy consuming. That’s part of the reason why I haven’t gotten around to writing much. It’s a shame, too. The other night, I was simply hanging out in my house, enjoying the gift called ‘weekend’ and I had a million and one story ideas in my head. I decided to write a few of them down for you to read! They are still very incomplete so bear with me here.

Ballads of the Heavens

This would be either a three-part series or a book divided into three parts; Ballad of the Sun, Ballad of the Moon and Ballad of the Stars. In this more 2D-esque world, the earth is flat and above is the sky; the heavens. They are what humanity sees.

An astrologer’s daughter, Daes, is a strong believer in the predictions from the heavens. It is common in her village to listen to the stars to hear fortunes and predictions. When her father makes the prediction that fire will rain from the sky and the heavenly bodies condemn the earth, she panics and tries to find a solution. Her father tells her that the only hope is to learn the ballads of the three ruling entities; the sun, the moon and the committee of stars.

Daes, being a bit of a musician herself, follows her father’s instructions and finds the woman who resides in the highest mountains; a place thought to be closely linked to the heavens. The old woman, who is also an astrologer, tells her that she must perform three good deeds; one for each heavenly body. Only then will they start to pay attention to her. Next, she must learn the three songs of the heavens. The three songs are spread across the land; one in each direction. They will be taught to her by riddles. If she can solve the riddle and play the song at the dedication location, the ruling body the song belongs to will refrain from harming the earth.

Daes sets off on this adventure with her provisions and a harp. Along her travels, she meets Eram; a traveling jester who plays the lute. He too has heard of the impending doom. The two venture onwards together to attempt to stop the tragedy that has been foretold. The two meet Cayan; a young swordsman who strives to become a hero. When Daes explains the fate of the world to him, he joins the two travelers without hesitation. He presents a flute to them that might aid in them.

After fulfilling the needed deeds, Daes and her comrades retrieve the first ballad; the sun ballad. They perform the song at the sun spring. The melody triggers a transformation. A spirit within Cayan awakens and turns him into a mystical shape who finds himself intimately connected with the sun; able to speak to it and request peace from it. The sun listens. Cayan explains that Daes and Eram must speak to the remaining heavenly bodies to compel them to agree to peace as well. He, in turn, will remain in the sun spring as is his destiny. He wishes his comrades farewell. It is up to Daes and Eram to continue their journey together.

(I realize now that this could also make for an interesting video game.)

Wholehearted

This story still needs a lot of fleshing out. I have the basic concept though. A certain ‘type’ of people will exist. They are considered the wholehearted since they have hearts that are stronger than those of halfhearted people. The halfhearted people often hunt the wholehearted in an attempt to literally steal their hearts and make it their own. The hearts of the wholehearted granted immortality and other incredible powers.

The existence of these conditions makes a love story nearly impossible. What if a wholehearted falls in love with a halfhearted? Would her or she know for sure if the other person loves them in return or if they simply desire the power of their hearts? Furthermore, it is possible for a wholehearted to corrupt their own hearts; causing them to lose their powers. There is also the possibility of a wholehearted granting part of their heart to another person; forever binding them. This could be used to save another person who is on the verge of death by sharing one’s heart and life force with them.

What I will do with this story-wise is still a tricky question, but regardless, I want there to be something involving love. Rest assured that there will be a line in the story referencing that the person loves the other wholeheartedly!

Broken Halo

As the name might suggest, this story follows an angel, Zon, who has been banished from heaven. She was tricked into committing a crime and was thus sent to live among the human; causing her to lose her wings, he halo and any of her other powers. Zon finds human life to be tedious. She is determined to retrieve her angel status. But along the way, she meets a human man. He shows her how delightful life can be and she decides to tell him her secret. He pledges to help her.

Yet along the way, Zon begins to feel troubled. Is she sure she wants to leave the human world to return to the heavens? It would mean leaving behind the man she got to know and all the customs she has gotten used to. The turbulence of happiness and sadness that humans experience intrigues her and she is delighted to experience it. When Zon reaches a point where heaven is willing to welcome her again, she refuses their offer. She stays on earth.

After some time has passed, Zon notices drastic changes. An earthquake shatters her home. When she investigates the cause, she notices that the cracks are not but from earth itself. They are broken barriers between the world of the mortals and the world of shadows; the realm that houses all evils. Zon, desperate to protect the human beings she has come to love, calls out to heaven to recruit her once again. She is accepted and she is given her wings. Upon flying back to heaven, she is told that shadows have begun to claw their way to the world of the mortals and will advance further if they are able to overtake earth. Zon joins the angel army to fight for earth’s survival.

During one of her battles on the earth, she finds the man she loves in the clutches of a shadow. Zon knows that humans nor angels are allowed to kill, but she knows that a shadow can inflict psychological damage. In order to save him from nightmares and such, Zon decides to break the highest law of her angel code. She pierces the heart of her lover with a heavenly arrow. Zon knows the punishment that will follow. As she watches the soul of her lover be taken up to heaven, she finds herself returning to the earth as human. Because she, an angel, took the life of a mortal, the soul of this mortal is given to the one she serves; heaven. The soul is held there forever. Zon knows he will be able to bask in the light and love of heaven’s embrace for eternity.

As Zon whispers her farewell, she notices a cold grip around her body; one that drags her down into the depths below the earth. Never had she expected to know the sensation of death. It was then that she realized her time as angel and her time as human was at an end. Forever she stays below the earth; weeping with a broken halo.

So, question!

Would any of you like to see me write one of these and post it on my blog piece by piece? It might be a fun project to do. Let me know what your thoughts are. If the results are ‘Anything is fine’ I will consider Ballads of the Heavens myself.

Have a pleasant week, internet!

Advertisements

Camp Nano Prep: A Glance at the Divine

Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? As the writers among us may or may not know, Camp Nano is only ten days away. Of course a person like myself will toss away all her social contacts, hobbies and any other activities that would define ‘having a life’ so to write like a maniac. I’ve created my own tradition nowadays. I’m clearly a planner and thus I dedicate the month prior to mindless typing to prepping for the big event.

Thus this month I’ve been overthinking many things. First off was the consideration of what to write, who to include and of course how much words I wanted to aim for. I set the bar high and set my goal at 75.000 words for the entire month. This means I will need to write 2500 words a day to complete the event. So that much has been established.

I considered writing a new story that came into existence after a message a friend sent me and my response to it. My imagination took the two messages and ran with it; creating an entirely new world with interesting characters. However, I decided to place this idea upon the shelf of to-writes and returned to my current favorite; Nivitera’s Promise.

This story held my attention during all of November and will do so again this upcoming month. I will resume the story. I will finalize the ‘first part’ of the story. I decided to turn the story into a four part series. The story is quite long and would thus become an immense book if it were to be published as one piece. Furthermore, the number four holds a very strong place within the tale.

WARNING!

May contain spoilers! But I do my best to avoid them. My apologies if I have spoiled anything.

Nivitera

The ruling, divine being of the world (Aroyina) is named Nivitera. This being is a creature that is comprised of four other entities. When combined, the four parts collide and combine into Nivitera; a being with the head and body of a lion, the wings and claws of an eagle, horns of a mountain goat and the tail of a seahorse. With that having been said, let’s dive into this being’s four parts!

Ni

Ni is a male god; represented by the form of an adult, male lion. He is depicted wearing white, black or shades of grey upon his coat. A combination of such colors is also possible. In this instance, he is often seen as a grey-coated lion with white manes and paws of a dark grey or black hue.

Ni is the god associated with courage. He represents one of the dimensions of space. He reigns over the summer season. This season is considered the season of opportunity. Often times, the name Ni or the letter N is assigned to the direction that is northward. Furthermore, this divine lion is connected to the plasma state of atoms. The ambassador*1 of Ni is a small feline male. This cat is named Feeyor. His title, granted to him by Ni, is the Prince of the Shores and the Tides.

Because Ni is the first quarter of Nivitera, many figureheads wish to depict the graceful lion upon their weapons to display their ability to lead. Statues of Ni are quite common among various royals of the world. Some take it a step further and have paintings made of them within the company of Ni himself.

Vi

Vi is a female god displayed by the shape of a fierce eagle. Often times the eagle is seen with wings spread wide. This divine part connects to the colors cyan, magenta and yellow; the primary colors. In many portraits these colors can be seen upon the body or wings of the bird. Some artists choose to dedicate one color to one portion of her body while others place the colors all about randomly. However, blending the colors is not respected and is seen of a sign of disrespect towards Vi.

The trait that connects to Vi is strength. Vi too, represents one dimension of space. Vi is also the god connected to fall; the season of decline. Therefore some think Vi is a ruthless, harsh being. She is connected to the gas form of matter. Her name or letter V connects to the direction we know as west. Therefore, the sun sets within Vi’s direction. It descends to the darkness in the presence of the god of general decline. Vi’s ambassador is named Akatthi. She is a tall woman of humanoid form but of a race unknown to the population of this fascinating world. She takes pride in her archery skills and uses this to protect the forest that has become her home. The title she received from Vi is the Princess of the Winds and the Woods.

Because Vi represents strength and since her season brings death to the world, many warriors carry a symbol of hers upon them when engaging in battle. It is said to bring luck o their battles. Weapons used to inflict damage upon foes are often engraved with the shape of an eagle. Furthermore, many persons who feel vulnerable or threatened, often seek refuge by praying to Vi for protection. In common conversation, when one finds themselves saved from a nearly impending doom, people say they were held by Vi’s wings; which caused them to survive the hazardous situation.

Te

Te is a female god; represented by a large and powerful-looking mountain goat. The horns upon her figure seem to exceed a size that is reasonable for her body. She is often depicted engulfed in red, purple or green colors. These are the secondary colors. In many portraits or statues, Te is shown with one hoof placed forward; as if she were to take a step. Her head is always shown high within the air.

Wisdom is the trait that is connected to Te. She represents the third and final dimension of space. Te is the god of the winter. This season is the season of pause, reflection and reincarnation since it casts the world into a state of renewal. Te represents the solid arrangement of matter. Te or the letter T is connected to the south. Te’s ambassador is a young woman who has hidden her form well and later changed it to another form to guard over the young child she gave the gem to. Her name remains Irill. Before she gifted her game, she held the title of the Princess of Sands and Stones.

Te is the god that gets approached when a person requires guidance; both in common knowledge o within matters that require great wisdom. She is said to watch over the world and its development. Many symbols of her reside within the homes of scholars or within universities. In time of dilemma, people often look to Te for guidance. Within common conversation, the expression, ‘holding Te upon both shoulders’ refers to a dilemma or conflict. Here Te represents the two (or more) outcomes a decision could create, depending on the choice(s). In this sense, she is said to help a person think, reflect and remain in balance during the process and make up their mind afterwards. Because Te is often depicted with a hoof forward, she is also the god that represents forward motion and innovation.

Ra

Last but not least, Ra is the god in the form of a male seahorse. His facial expressions are always kind and pleasant. Therefore he receives a very hospitable, warm look about him. Ra’s colors are turquoise, rosewood or maroon. Many creative artists color every separate scale upon his body in a different color; giving him a very checkered appearance. Yet the colors of Ra are allowed to blend without displaying disrespect and therefore it is done at occasions.

Ra’s connected trait is loyalty. However this trait is often seen as selflessness or nurturing. While the other gods define space, Ra defines time. His season is spring; the season during which things come to life and the cycle starts a new. In a sense, time returns to the world during this season. As a divine seahorse likely would, he represents the liquid atomic state. He completes the cycle of directions too by standing for the east; the place where the sun rises and thus the day (time) starts. Ra’s ambassador is to this point still unknown.

Ra is sometimes linked to a pendulum. As the pendulum swings, it defines time. Should it stop, then perhaps it is because time has stopped. Therefore, Ra is often seen upon artwork pertaining to clocks or other forms of defining time. Some images show Ra wrapped around the sun, since for many ages, the sun was the indication of time that was used. The expression, ‘Ra will tell’ is equal to the idea that time will tell.

Note *1; Ambassador of the gods = a figure chosen by the divine part to guard a special gem. This ambassador is blessed with special oracle-like qualities and immortality to fulfil the job they were chosen for. The ambassadors are also known as guardians. They guard the gem until they see a person fit to hold it.. Persons that quality for a divine gem often strongly associate with the trait that the god stands for.

Outro

There you have it; a good amount of information on what four components make up the divine Nivitera. I am not sure if I have missed any parts but feel free to point them out in the comments.

I might find another chance (and the inspiration) to set up another prep blog but I am not promising anything. If I do not get to that, I will do my best to keep you posted during the actual month of writing but even that might not be done. I will not promise!

So for now; till next time.

PS: For anyone wondering; my NaNo name is Tazira.